I will transform your initial draft into a coherent and grammatically correct final edit with a high level of readability. 

Proofreading

Fixing Grammatical Errors

Grammar Refinement

Vocabulary Replacement

Unnecessary Punctuation Removal

Removal of Redundancies 

Repetition prevention

Additionally, if you have copied content that needs to be converted into original content, particularly for plagiarism prevention, feel free to make a paraphrasing request.  

Location & Availability:

Copy-editing is available 7 days a week online

ESL English Editing is available 7 days a week in Brisbane CBD (IELTS Writing & Assessments)

SMS/Kakao/Line/Wechat/Whatsapp - 0415 807 205 

More Info - https://www.0415807205.com